The Hole - Part 1 and Part 2 - Story 2

The Hole Part 1

Some people say is was from the heavens, Some people say that the hole goes through earth, and others say it was a message, but what is the message!

It was cold out my grandma and grandpa were cooking dinner because it was my birthday, so they told me to wait outside for the surprised. But at 3:30am October the third something very strange happened.

I flash of light separated me from my grandparents, a large noise sounding like three hundred jumbo jets were landing on top of each other, then everything went quiet just like the engines of those jumbo jet had crashed and had been absorbed in a black hole the size of Russia.

I couldn't open my eyes, the light and dusk  had violently pierced the pupil of my eye, then everything went dark. 

That's all I remember, but 6months had past and  I feels like the incident just happened yesterday. What happened on that day, what happened to my family, how did the hole becomes so large...

Read Part 2 to find out what happens next.

The Hole Part 2



The next day I went over to the extrodinary hole, I tried to think back to the incident but every time I tried to thinks everything would be blurry, but had to find out.


I went to the edge of the hole and it looked familiar to the round object in my eye before everything went dark. I kept on thing to my self was this a message or was this a paranormal event. I waked around the edges of the hole and every 2metres or so there was a large spike time dint in the ground. This was no accident, the house didn't just fall down into the earth. It was a ship of some sort I didn't know if its a jet plane, cargo ship or a UFO. The UFO was the only object which is circular and could have enough strength
to with hold the deep impact anyway.

I looked down the hole one last time with a confuddled face, why is there a space ship on earth? Then I could feel a gush of wind blowing on his face I steped back of my mark like a runner getting a foul and just starred at the enormous ship spinning in circles, I blink then the Space ship was gone no where to be seen.

Then everything went blurry again and I heard "wake up sleepy head it's your birthday" My mother was calling me and I was in bed. The cake had 6 candles on it but before it was my twelve birthday. Was this all a dream, will this happen in the future, what happened with the Space ship???

The Dark Cave Part 1 Story

We were outside standing to a gigantic mountain figuring out what to do. We were looking around the mountain tring to find some sort of entrance or hole, but there wasn't anything not event a solid dint, this mountain was perfect, but why?

It was me Sam and Johnny and if your wondering why we tring to find an entrance for this mountain, well its because we were tring to find the gold of the forbidden tomb, which was in this mountain.

We all decided to go different ways until we heard a scream. "Ahhh help us help us! please!" We all ran to the same spot think that there was a person with an answer to where the entrance of tomb was, but we didn't need any direction map or guidance all we really needed was that one scream.

We didn't really react to the scream because we are all marines from the royal Australian army and trust me when I say we've heard the devil speak...

"Stop, look over there." Sam said. We found the entrance of the forbidden tomb and this is where it gets interesting. There was a leaver in the shape of devils leg, we pulled it and a six layered wooden door submerged from the ground and we all ran in with caution expecting the worst. We started hearing noises on the other side of the twisted narrow tunnel we were about to walk through.

Sam went first hen Johnny then me, we could see light getting brighter and brighter as we walked towards it, and as we turned that corner we saw gold and jewels, there was rubies the sizes of gym balls and the grand prize we saw then was a statue but this statue wasn't any old statue it was solid gold with rubies and emerald, diamonds and sapphires, it weighed a tonne but we all could pick it up. Once we pick the statue of the ground the earth started moving the walls started wobbling and the roof was about to collapse so we grabbed everything we could and ran for our life's, through the tunnels and out the entrance. When we got out side we looked up and the mountain imploded with everything inside.

What's in the 'Blurb'?

What is a Blurb? A blurb is the second most important selling object for books. A blurb usually is written on the back cover and describes hundreds of words in a coupe of discriptive sentences.

One of the things that I looked for was the front cover once I've seen the front cover and it appeals to me and start to read the blurb, here it the most important thing of the book. Once you've read the blurb you'll have a brief discription of what the book is about instead of wasting your time on a book you read and didn't enjoy.
The main parts of the blurb that appealed to me were the big bold headings etc.( ACTON, ADVENTURE )and the extrodinary text and language etc. ( the roller coaster ride of your life!, Action packed from head to toe )
My first impressions on my book Extreme Adventures 'Shark Bait' were "This looks pretty cool, I'll give it a try." and I tried it and it was super cool I loved it all the way to the end. The awesomometre was 100% and it was still rising.
Couple of things inspired me to have a go and read this book, one being the colour and text. These to things put together are inseparable from each other because of the large font coloured in with extrodinary colours making you just walk over pick the book up and just start reading it with no delay, its like the book hypnotizes you from the minute you look at the front cover and then places you in your own little world once you've read the blurb.
'Shark Bait' 
It's here! the most action packed, extrodinary book in Extreme Adventures history, with action from head to toe your extremonator will be going wild with action all throughout this book. Sam meets a boy called Michi, a young Japanese boy who cant swim and hated water and when Sam and Michi were watching the colourful coral reef they looked up knowing that they shouldn't of, then...

Once you've read the blurb you'll know for sure, that inside the book your holding, beholds another world within this universe.

Next time you pick up a book, think twice and just give it a chance.... and 99% of the time you'll love it.
It's guaranteed.

My reading experiences!

Are you struggling to find a nice quiet spot to read one of your favourite books, by your favourite author from your favourite series?
Try reading in a tree maybe at night time or in the morning when no one is awake so it would be inpolite to make noise, I always do and my book reading experience has risen since year 7 at my last school.

Through my reading experiences I have come among heaps of stories, books, novels and both fiction and non- fiction and some of the books I have read and enjoyed were, cherub by Robert Machamore, extreme adventures by Mr D'ath and the books by J.K Rolling like harry potter.

One of the things that I find my favourite books are by the front cover, it needs to be appealing to age groups of the books experiences. The book cant have a baby in a tree whilst the book it for a teenager of the age of 18years. The blurbs are the next best thing you should be looking for.

The blurb needs to be exiting, adventurous and magical, it needs to make the read feel like there in there own little bubble of adventure all by reading the blurb of the book.

Extreme Adventures 'Shark Bait'

'Shark Bait is the most interesting, adventurous, thrilling roller coaster ride you've ever ridden. With action, adventure and Drama, other books wont appeal after you've read this!
From the start of Chapter one all the way till Chapter 26 are amazing you'll be coming back for more and more in the Future. 'Extreme Adventures Shark Bait' is the most Extreme book out, at one point this book got extreme and teaches you how to survive, if somthing unfortunate happened when you were at the barrier reef looking at coral and fish. Like how to survive a ,Tsunami!, and that's only one of the things which happens in this awesome book.
Comment if you want to know more about 'Shark Bait' or the series 'Extreme Adventures'  

What's in the Title?

In the current novel I'm reading "Extreme adventures, Shark Bait" events occur which probably happen to people every second day of the week. The title of the book is expected but more than the usual 'shark' makes this book come 'ALIVE'. The author Justin D'ath has a great and adventurous mind with the other books in mind, each and every book published by him are different and extrodinary. 

If I would write a novel for the series Extreme Adventures I would most defiantly publish the names as Extreme Adventures 'Stranger Danger or Extreme Adventures 'Mr Unknown'
Stranger Danger:- Stranger Danger starts off in the back yard of Julian's house then with out Julian knowing a big white Holden van slowly creeps up one metre at a time until...
Mr Unknown:- This story begins in a village in northern America where three crooks are robbing a mans home owned business until with a blink of an eye the robbers were gone leaving a note reading "This city is protected, you are being watched from all around don't bother moving because we will follow you." Is this person good? or is this man evil?

Personally i think that my book shouldn't be called 'Shark Bait' because of all the other interesting things that happens in the story, this book should be called,                       The Extreme adventures of Sam!
How's Sam still alive!
What happens when all goes wrong! 
Please post if you have new Names for 'Shark Bait'